DjAbbic's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[s a n j o s e m e r c u r y]

Nice.

Needs a bit of variation, and I think this might fit more into glitch of DnB more than techno. Still a good song.

trancedatlantic responds:

Good idea It is now DnB

[M.W Big Bada Boom (remix)]

Kick a bit dry

And the claps don't seem to have a very strong effect. Other than that the rest was good. That's a good synth :P

juicedmaster responds:

yeah i know, i was gonna fix it but got bored and just thought id upload lol, thanks for the response

[[RF] - Ultragain]

Lol

0:56 exact same buildup and time as Uberdown O_o Still I guess the transition wasn't akward here :) But the melody at 1:51 it was hard to tell when it started and stopped and the kick didn't fit in. Nice pitch change 2:32. High bass at 3:13 is sweet. Practically same style as Uberdown, except no loud drumroll :)

RaveFantazy responds:

haha, i did get the advise to my head at this time :b

but i got no idea for the buildup so i decided to try what i remember :D

but thanks for the comment, i just made this up to gain some more power from that Uberdown-style :b

[[RF] - Uberdown]

Well...

M8, that melody is the best I've heard in a week :)

But, the snare rolls at 0:28 and 2:16 just killed my ears.

The build-up at 0:56 is very good :), especially when the hats came in, then the melody comes in. The transition at 1:52 sounded a bit weird imo. Maybe it was the chord change. Maybe put a pause there see how it sounds :)

The transition into the higher pitched bass at 2:59 was pure awesomeness, then the awesome fade-out :)

In conclusion, the only thing that is of concern is the snares and the 1:52 transition.

Cheers. Hope you use my melo XD

RaveFantazy responds:

yeeh thanks for the advice :b i try to do something on my time.

[-Transformation-]

You again XD

Well, the sounds at the start of the song seem to drown each other out, which is a bad thing as you should know :S. And the 16th hats at 1:08 are a bit too loud IMO. Sorry :\

Well, there is also the good part :) The melody, is awesomeness, the choir/chord thing gives it a scary feel :) The heartbeats at the end add to the scariness :S

I hope your response isn't crazily long >.<

Step responds:

Wow, thanks for the helpful review! I'll fix that beginning, and the hi-hats too. Blackhole12 told me about my horrible limiter abusing, so I'll turn off the limiter and EQ every instrument properly to remove clipping. Anyway, thanks again for the review, and don't worry, it's not that long this time round :P.

[_/Electronica\_]

IMO...

The kick drowns out the other instruments yet it is dry. Not a good combo. If it was to drown out, make it a bit stronger? 2:19 onwards has this whoosh sound in the background and it's a bit annoying

Other than that, the melody is awesome :) Love the piano at the end.

Sorry if I sounded harsh. Just trying to help :)

ShootingStar responds:

Haha nah :P its good - thanks for the advice!!

ShootingStar

[Musical Evolution]

Wow

I just looked at your first 5 reviews and found out that I was right about all your reviews being that long :S

I lol'ed pretty hard at window's part. 4:27 might be some melody from Pirates of the Carribean or something? I'm pretty sure I've heard it before too.

Step responds:

Lol, my reviews XD. Sometimes I even wonder to myself how I'm able to come up with so much to say about just one song :P.
About the windows part, yeah, I made 4 other windows songs, so I found it pretty easy :D. Also, I finally found the melody. It's a faster version of a BG tune played with an echo-ish flute in the game Patapon, where you have to fight a big plant boss called a 'Shookle'. Go to 0:40, turn the volume up and try and listen to the flute in the background (remove spaces):
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cCXpMe xJ83c&feature=related#movie_player
In other words, I can finally sleep at night XD. Thanks for the review, and I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[[CS] TheSushiRaveSong]

Wow...

I still don't get tempted to eat sushi after listening to this =\

Nice song^^

Unrl responds:

Why not? =P Thanks!

[{dj-N} All's Lost [Full]]

Lots of effects this time

And a whole new melody O_o!

My only critic is 1:00 when the cutoff freq fades. It sounds too sudden. You could edit and make it just a tiny bit less sudden and it would all be good XD

Other than that it's good. I hear a stronger kick :)

dj-Nate responds:

Alright, I definitely agree with this as well. Will fix that right up!

[{Dj-L} My Punishment (Nustyle)]

Nice

I've been making some hardstyle too :)
TBH the intro is kinda long, and the synth just feels like it doesn't fit that well, or maybe that's just my low quality earphones. Anyways, if you have the time, check my stuff out :)

Meonly70 responds:

Will do man, thanks for the opinion and review :D