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Nice atmosphere. I really like how you used the phaser at 0:39 with the saw lead, that was brilliant. The bells/piano also sound great, although it sounds a bit muddy when everything else is playing, but that's very minor.

I think the kick needs to hit harder with more bass though, because I think the track is lacking on the low end. Maybe boost the high end of the snare, even though it already sounds amazing.

I love what you did at 1:17-1:37, but perhaps the transition at 1:37 could be improved somehow. I also think a reverse hat/snare/clap sweep would sound great with the phasing and the snare you currently have.

Good luck finishing this, it sounds great so far! Keep it up.

I-Saved-The-World responds:

Thanks for taking the time to write me a thought of review! I agree with a lot of what you've said. It definitely needs to bring the 'wubwub' back. haha

Cheers,
-ISTW

Very nice. It doesn't have that density to it that the pros seem to have, but I'm sure that all of us have the same problem. You are pretty close though!

As has been mentioned before, I think the chiptune instrument would either work out great if you used it for a melody. Of course, it would have to match the wobbles, but that's for you to figure :)

Keep it up.

TBM responds:

Glad you enjoyed it!

I'm loving how heavy the wobbles are. I'm not familiar with Ableton's Operator, but if it's anything like Fl Studio's 3xOsc, then I'm very impressed.

If you can make wobbles like that, I bet you could make some sick electro basslines as well.

Keep it up.

DetiousMusic responds:

They're pretty close, though operator has 4 osc. d: Thanks though.

Sick buildup! I felt that the drop could have been more epic for the key you have chosen, but hey, I can't complain! :). I also didn't hear a clap/snare in the drop? Not sure what it would sound like but it might be something to consider.

Really awesome synths and melodies as well. Congratulations.

Very interesting concept. I feel that there aren't enough lows in this though, but that's just my personal preference. Well mixed and very nice synths. Keep it up!

Love that reverb kick in the intro. Never heard anything like it. That piano is beautiful. Love your use of it. The bass was not crunchy enough for me, but that's just personal opinion and I guess it works well with the rest of the mix.

Sweet break too.

Keep it up :)

Smash is the right word to describe this.

If I had to pick points to improve, I would change the kick for the drop so that it's clearer, though it is more than perfect for the progressive intro. I would also make the lead sharper and less phat, but that's just me. I would also add some sort of minor delay to the mini arp (it plays at 1:40, 1:52 etc) but again, that is just me.

Intro is flawless.

In all, a good 7:20 spent. Thanks.

qkilsdonk responds:

Thank you for your time man! feedback is really usefull! :)

Well, that was an interesting trip.

Very nice synths too.

Woah. Amazing synths and pitches man! All I can criticize is that the snare gets a bit drowned out by the kick. You could also put a volume limiter on some channels so that the synths aren't too overpowering, but that's purely my opinion.

Really nice groove and atmospheric sounds, good job.

Yet another clean track. I can tell the amount of effort you put into that kick, it sounds amazing in the mix, well done.

The break is sweet. The piano's reverb sometimes gets a bit piercing though.

Amazing transition. I would have gone for something heavier but I guess the style was already established in the intro :P. Very well-placed percs as well. However, I thought that the tom/low tom got a bit too repetitive for me, but that's just personal opinion.

The sweep at the end was a bit long for me, but I can't be too fussy now can I :)

Well done, keep it up.

D-Chain responds:

Thank you abbic :)
i can understand your opinion's
and now i see the piano's verb is indeed pretty high to the ears, thanks to you.
the sweep at the end however, ends the song.
i could make it shorter indeed. [which i will probably do]

I experiment with a wide range of electronic genres (currently experimenting with complextro). I've been making music since November 2009. I use FL Studio 10 (Producer Edition) for all my productions and I currently use 3xOsc and Sytrus as my main VSTs.

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