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Just a few things

IMO, the snare is too soft. I also don't like how the lead starts out sounding squarish, but that's probably just me.

Also, might want to turn up the bell/pad? (sounds to me like a pad that starts out with a nice bell sounds) sound, or at least the bell part, if that makes sense.

aliaspharow responds:

Thanks man :D you're right about the snare actually i fixed that a bit, just trying to make it sound more Deadmau5-ish and i suck at it so i tried to keep it quiet, but il definitly fix it with the full version. The Lead is supposed to sound squarish lol.

The pad is actually a piano with allot of reverb. Turned the mix of the reverb down a bit i think it sounds allot better. Thanks again :3

Lots of potential

I have to say the intro has the potential to expand to a great minimal-house song. If you lay off the pad and add something else, that simple bass can turn out great. Here's an example of a great 'bass-only' song that is simple yet amazingly head-bobbing:
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GGMEpE 88trE

Like I said before, this has alot of potential. Take your time though, it's not easy coming up with catchy tunes in this genre :)

Omg

Hacker.

Nothing else to say

This is amazing. I'm sure she's out there somewhere appreciating your devotion.
Sorry for your loss, very saddening.

Very nice

A very nice intro to the breakdown. Leads and effects sound very professional. Amazing transition at 2:20. I can hear the great mixing that went into this as well, everything is perfect.

You got skills, keep it up.

Agreed with below somewhat

This will sound amazing if it was remastered. Maybe add another synth on top of the others at a few places to spice it up, but overall it's a great piece. Would love to hear this remastered, good job.

Hmm...

I'd say that the wobble doesn't fit too well with a 4/4 beat, which is why I like it when the dubstep beat kicks in. Very interesting how you managed to change the bass with the same rhythm after the break.

When the trancey plucks came in, I think there could be a substitute for them, at least until it gets to the pluck solo, because it didn't seem to fit too well with the heavy bass.

As for the percussion, that's a sick snare, I love it, the kick however, didn't have enough lows imo.

That's all I have to say about this at the moment, a very nice piece.

Nechura responds:

cheers mang

Wow

That lead at 0:28 is absolutely beautiful.

If you still have the project/remember what VST you used for that synth and can tell me, it would be very appreciated :)

GrayZ responds:

Thanks alottt (: I think its a lead that jesse made, if not it will probs jsut be a preset out of nexus or z3ta+ :]

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SCORE
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Intro = 2/2
Outro = 2/2
Blend = 2/2
Transitions = 2/3
Bass = 1.5/2
Originality = 3/3
Drums = 2/2
Melodies = 2.5/4
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Score = 17/20 = 8.5/10
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Sorry, I couldn't resist

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I experiment with a wide range of electronic genres (currently experimenting with complextro). I've been making music since November 2009. I use FL Studio 10 (Producer Edition) for all my productions and I currently use 3xOsc and Sytrus as my main VSTs.

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